Fighting with poetic Canadian Goddesses…

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May 9 by The Running Son

You MUST read the poem at writingsofamrs and our poetry battle.. Canada v America and the but-whacking somebody took… at: PAY DAY THURSDAY: Introducing Jim The Running Son.

So I don’t lose these, I’ll publish, but it is a command under my royal, imperial anointing that you read the poem at the event. It’s a harsh beating… soooombody gets. And YOU get to vote. Below? Comments I made later this morning.

Somebody commented on the banter in the poem, and Jen and I had to clarify…

Not flirting. More like hurting!
A rough-up. I got boxed.
Tossed-out, and lost
in a roxy boss-lady
skirting of Cali-based
Canadian-hating, a taste
of my medicine-trading
with nations that have
Goddesses poetically aiming.
Now I’m burning.

Mrs’s that write….
Dont flirt. Jen’s a bliss-
loving kiss-writing
skirt-fight. I admit, I hurt.
But what I like
Is her motherly
tightly sighted, and rightly
devotional protection of life,
and her kids
husband and poetic knife-light….Whoof….
Word-play is like life,
Rhyming, a playground
where adults get to lay down, for once, and forget their strife.

Both by yours truly,

on a carrot, and embarrassed by unruly Canadian ferret-esses glaring, not caring what poetic pain, and disparaging self-assessments are contained in the smack-the-Cali-boy spirit of un-errant maiming and tearing dreams up. Made me tame. 😉

J

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3 thoughts on “Fighting with poetic Canadian Goddesses…

  1. Jen and I…. I don’t believe I said a thing 😉

    • I’ll get it right someday, Ahhhh damn.
      Edit for claaaarity again

      Went back and refreshed my memory.. you did earlier, which is good.

      Whatever. Jim likes jennifer she is very cool she is married
      dont know who said what dont care i respect her respect is good marriage is sacred case closed

      j

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