May 11 by The Running Son
It has taken experiments in to many styles, and “language” formations over the last few days to get to a place where I like whats happening.
I think that ‘liking’ happened last night, and this morning. I went nutso– wrote several strange poems, that when I went back in to them, there were decent ideas, but covered in so much extra junk that nobody could get to them (plus the ideas themselves needed much love and clarifying..)
as a consequence of furiously re-working already published poems, no-body has read them, any of them really. because they were nothing but interesting word-circuses at best, and attempts to work out some communication ideas, and I went back in mined these poems… o you r smart u get the point. (better than i think) 😉
ok so I want to present or rep-resent (ha [resented repetition]) a few small and concrete packages 4 you–
a few collections, labeled, notated here, for you to get a sense for what has happened– the style changes and searching. A couple days and 60+ poems has taught me, and I say this without falsehood or ego, more about communication than my 44 years. I think.
oV er– longpoems except for the finAl one. enjoy.
😉 you r all smartie-pantses. i trust u eeeeasy.
the late-(nite)crafted ones
The best of the latest. 3 under-a-minute quik-read poems for your enjoyment. written, liked by a few, then re-formed backwards, shaving off excess and fuzz and working on clarity and (relative) flow. I like em. hope u do. (somewhere in the minds of a few, [& my version history] the scraps lay in compost making food for poetry….)
A few short non-error corrected. poems of love and freedom and the restrictions of water on burning hearts and things… you know 😉
If you made it thru all that, you may have an interest in this final “offering”. Raw, (at times) but with irony, not too hard-ened i hope. I was in very “top form” and on a manic… but…it is my “plea for poetry, or tolerance or love… or u decide.
there are several more i could do like this. depending on response. 😉 Love you guys,