´°¤,. Nature by Numbers .,¤°´
14September 18 by The Running Son
´°¤,. Nature by Numbers .,¤°´
I
Have
seen spring
spiraling, pine cones
whistling notes on the wind,
sunflowers, organized by pedal and seed, slowly opening,
stripping shackle and shell and freely spinning, seed to star; a universe, living.
by Jim Aldrich (:
Written for We Drink Because We are Poets prompt: http://wedrinkbecausewerepoets.com/2013/09/16/monday-poetry-prompt-21-fibonacci-poetry/
Line word numbering: 1,1,2,3,5,8,13
©2013 JimAldrich
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I must agree with Shainbird. I love the progression from I to the universe. Living! Glorious!
Rob Thank you kindly! This was a really fun prompt that sparked several great poems, including one from ShainBird ^_^
Very lovely, Jim 🙂
Thank you Marie. Good to see you! Come peak at what I have been up to (;—-> http://mybridgetoyou.wordpress.com/
Just went there. Beautiful site. I’m so looking forward to following you and Ar Vhee on your journey 🙂
Beautiful Jim, it starts out like a personal testimony and ends up dispersing back into the universe – a full circle. There is a lot a imagery and movement in this, lovely!
I have been sitting here all day thinking I really like this one. Like most of us that is not usually the case.. so fun how good visuals emerge in their own time!
So lovely. I can picture it in my mind. =)
❤ Life spirals like that I think. To the stars. ^_^
I liked this !!!
Why thank You! Your Gravitar image is wicked btw (: